You Give Me Butterflies
Here we sit and just reminisce
I could stay here for hours
Because I've never felt quite like this
I stare into your eyes and you stare into mine
Now we both have butterflies
Such a feeling I can't define
The awkward two
Some dare to call us
But we'll pull through
It's because of that feeling, because of the butterflies I get
They fill my stomach to the fullest
And it's a feeling I'd never regret
Submitted: May 15, 2011
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oh so sweet, truly heartwarming!! This is a BRIGHT STAR, SO COMFORTING!!!
Sun, May 15th, 2011 2:42pm
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Wow, thank you so much for your nice comment!:D
Sun, May 15th, 2011 7:50am
Aww This Is So Sweet :) You've Turned The Song I Like Into Something Better . . Thanks For Entering And I'll Definitely Remember You. Hmm Results Won't Be Up For A While But I'll Make Sure To Tell You When They Are
Sun, May 15th, 2011 7:55pm
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Thanks so much! I'm excited now:D
Sun, May 15th, 2011 2:27pm
How wonderful...I got butterflies in my stomach when reading this lol
awesome job~
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Haha thank you!:D
Mon, May 16th, 2011 3:06am
Omigosh! Eeeek! This is SO true! Like, it reminds me of times with some guys. Lol. And this was really cute as well!
I usually say cute just for the sake of it but this was CUTE as in CUTE! lol.
Update me if you have something more =)
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Thanks! Don't worry I will:D
Mon, May 16th, 2011 3:06am
Wow. Just...wow. McKenna, this is amazing! Truly well-written and unbelievably relatable. It gets my vote...I'm gonna go click the Like button :)
I wish you all the best in the contest!
oxox,
Danni :)
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Wow thank you so so much! I really appreciate it, Danni:D
~McKenna Rose
I GET butterflies all the time!! it just is LOVE
Tue, May 17th, 2011 2:15am
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Naaw thanks:) I'm sure your's is great!
Tue, May 17th, 2011 2:38am
I liked this piece and your other poem, Fit Pefectly. love the word choice in both. I would appreciate if you would read some of my work. -CJam
Wed, May 18th, 2011 12:24am
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Thank you so much!!:D Sure, I'll check out some of your work.
Tue, May 17th, 2011 6:18pm
That's adorable! ^-^
Fri, May 20th, 2011 12:45am
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Thank you:D
Thu, May 19th, 2011 8:14pm
This is is cute, love it! You have a great talent. :D
Fri, May 20th, 2011 10:10am
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Thank you, it means a lot to me!:D
Sat, May 21st, 2011 6:13am
OMG!!!That was so AWESOME!!!I really love your style of writing!!!
Fri, May 20th, 2011 12:23pm
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Wow thank you!:)
Sat, May 21st, 2011 6:16am
That was a very sweet and honest poem.
I can relate to it:) Which I love!
You have talent.
Good work.
xoxo
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Thank you!:D
Sun, May 22nd, 2011 3:40pm
This is a very sweet poem and reminds me of the innocence of young love... You write very well at thirteen. Keep writing and learning. And never lose those butterflies!!
Mon, May 23rd, 2011 2:40am
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Aww thank you! I kinda like the feeling of butterflies even more now:)
Mon, May 23rd, 2011 3:52am
I like it. It's adorable.~
Sun, May 29th, 2011 2:04pm
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Awwe thank you!
Sun, May 29th, 2011 7:43am
i love it girl!
Mon, May 30th, 2011 11:11pm
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Thank you!:D
Mon, May 30th, 2011 4:33pm
Awww your giving me butterflies by letting me read it :D
Tue, May 31st, 2011 9:56am
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Awww haha thank you;D
Tue, May 31st, 2011 2:11pm
Simple and exquisite... You're amazing. Keep writing...
The awkward two, some dare to call us - this is my fav line for some unknown reasons.
Great writ McKenna...
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me:)
Wed, June 1st, 2011 5:31pm
It's so cute!!!
Thu, June 9th, 2011 2:12am
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Aww thank you!:D
Thu, June 9th, 2011 11:19am
Awwee this is really cute :)
Mon, June 20th, 2011 11:45pm
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Thank you!:)
Tue, June 21st, 2011 6:50am
I love this, great job!
Mon, June 27th, 2011 2:38am
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it:)
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I entered that contest too! :D Anyway, it's amazing how much emotion you put into this considering you only wrote it for a contest, I'm clicking the like button :)
Sun, May 15th, 2011 2:26pmAuthor
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Awww thank you:D
Sun, May 15th, 2011 7:30am