Will You Be My Valentine?*

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Valentine's Day special for my fans, friends and readers. Have a great Valentine's Day!!!
Folks this poem of mine has been made into a full fledged song on youtube:
https://youtu.be/nZRC3gCO2gA

"Will You Be My Valentine?"

A tremble on my lips before I speak

A hesitation in my heart making it so weak

A fearful thought whether it’d be fine

If I say, “Will you be my valentine?”

A certain spark in your big beautiful eyes

Talking so sweet to just mesmerize

Making me say something which you can’t decline

Such sweet words like will you be my valentine?

A certain sizzle of a special kind

That makes your looks a priceless find

Your captivating beauty is so dainty and divine

That can’t hold myself say, “Will you be my valentine?”

A special place where I can admire your smile

Holding your hands in mine all the while

And then say something so sublime

Like will you be my valentine?

An angelic attraction of your lovely face

Irresistible charm of your pristine grace

Enticing me to ask out you for a dine

After saying, “Will you be my valentine?

I know you have a heart of gold deep inside

So now please snatch the rose from me before it is dried

And offer it back to me with that golden line,

"Will You Be My Valentine?"

"February is considered as a month of Love.

Hope it turns out to be a month of Dove

bringing peace around the world

and cupid's arrow striking enemies making them fall in love."

Submitted: February 13, 2013

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cgirl001

Awww sweet....

Wed, February 13th, 2013 2:30pm

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Thanks dear :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:41am

Marcela Re Ribeiro

For sure the answer will be "YES"! Lovely piece! Brazilian Kisses :-)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 2:34pm

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Thanks so so much. I'm now jumping with joy and it know no bounds. Thanks for Your kisses and I'm returns those kisses with same intensity :))

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:41am

Criss Sole

No one is going to refuse to be your valentine after reading this. I loved it.

Wed, February 13th, 2013 2:43pm

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Thanks for such a sweet comment. ^_^

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:39am

Sultry Alice

You capture the feelings of many young men and boys. The nervousness, the adoration, the hope. Your poem has a school boy charm about it, and is evry endearing.

Your a romantic and sexy guy!

Well done.....

Alice

Wed, February 13th, 2013 3:01pm

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Thanks you very much dear for showering so much appreciation. I don't have words to express thanks to you. You're always sweet in your comments. :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:38am

Buffershaker

A beautiful romantic poem,how could any girl resist those charms written with tenderness,love,warmth and devotion.It's definitely better than anything i have read in a Hallmark card.Thanks for sharing this little gem.

Wed, February 13th, 2013 3:52pm

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Thanks so much for appreciating and taking time out reading :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:35am

hafsa91

awwww,so lovely,its lovely lovely n lovely,u r such a gud poet.keep it up my teacher,lolz

Wed, February 13th, 2013 4:08pm

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hahaha....You consider me your teacher, then I would introduce you some day to my teacher here on booksie. She is really good poetess. Once you read her work you'll forget me.

Thanks for your sweet comment. :) :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:33am

hafsa91

did u write it 4 sum one?

Wed, February 13th, 2013 4:09pm

Author
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Hmmm...Thanks no comments. ;)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:33am

marshaRf

Nice poem, I'm sure no one will reject you if you give them such a beautifully written, sweet poem. I like the picture at the end too.

Wed, February 13th, 2013 9:54pm

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Thanks you very much for all the appreciation and your kind words :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:19pm

Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

I love this poem, its sweet, sappy and romantic :D
On the other hand, I don't like Valentines Day at all, so I have mixed feelings about this poem.
Though i must say it was amazingly written :D

Wed, February 13th, 2013 10:04pm

Author
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Thanks so much for giving your comment :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:17pm

Lady Delyriah

Not my usual cup of tea, but I like it nonetheless, nicely done! I can imagine each stanza uttered by a completely different individual. Great =)

Thu, February 14th, 2013 12:12am

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Thanks so much :))

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:16pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Well, from a guys point of view, I WISH THAT I HAD WRITTEN IT!
It gets a like/vote from me.

Thu, February 14th, 2013 1:24am

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Thanks so much for liking and voting for it. :))

Wed, February 13th, 2013 8:15pm

Lisa Ayers

Hi dynamic12, stopping by as you requested. So glad I did!

My favorite part is how you described the nervousness that men feel, love it!

You captured the romance and charm so many search for, heartfelt and well done.

Thanks for the invite.

Thu, February 14th, 2013 5:28am

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Thank you very very much for reading and commenting :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 10:35pm

ShimmerShine

Awww! It was such a lovely poem...
Your words are so sweet...the flow and rhythm is perfect...!
Loved it...!

Thu, February 14th, 2013 6:49am

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Thanks a lot dear for your lovely comment. :)

Wed, February 13th, 2013 10:58pm

thumblina Aka vandana

Oye apne mera comment delete kar diya tha kya.......

I was the first one to comment......

Anyways.......it is heartfelt....

I really loved it...

I got tears in my eyes wen I read it....

I liked the hearts

I wish someone would have asked me

"Will you be my valentine"

Lovely as usual

Thu, February 14th, 2013 8:55am

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Arrey mujhe to aapka comment mila hi nahi. It may be 'cause booksie is going through maintenance that's why it may not have got posted. Many readers and friends even complained that they can't find my poem. I was bit shocked then today I saw a message on my screen that Booksie is going through maintenance. So I thought it may be 'cause of that only.

Anyways thanks for your Lovely comment. And If You don't mind Can I say to you "Will You be my Valentine?" Please don't beat me If you don't like this!!!

Thu, February 14th, 2013 1:09am

Mikey CD

nothing else except your poem sums up the happiness of valentine's day. (applause)

Thu, February 14th, 2013 2:45pm

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Wow!! You made my day with your glorious comment. Thanks a lot :)

Thu, February 14th, 2013 8:49am

shaleheen

Valentine love poem as i expected...
i like it and give it a like vote....
--Shaleheen

Thu, February 14th, 2013 5:12pm

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Thanks for reading, liking and commenting on it :)

Thu, February 14th, 2013 9:44am

QuinMarie

Beautiful!
--Quin(:

Thu, February 14th, 2013 7:21pm

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Thanks so so much. ^_^

Thu, February 14th, 2013 8:20pm

ashi17

Hey dynamic ! Today is 14th feb and I am sitting on airport to catch flight to back to my home and searching love elements in booksie's website and felling hap hap happy to read your power packed loving punch..... Wow what a mind blowing poem perfectly written on valentine's day... Loved it !! Happy valentine's day to you love boy ;)
Very well written.... Very pleasing ..... Keep rocking ji !!!

Thu, February 14th, 2013 7:59pm

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First of all Happy Valentine's day to you too!!

You don't know how badly I missed your comments and views on my work. Really I consider you my mentor. This poem is product of your request. You remember!!! That's why I created this one. Otherwise, this V-day I was totally blank to create anything. It was your demand which I just can't refuse. And then this one happened. Thanks to you, dear. I give all credit to you. ^_^

Thu, February 14th, 2013 8:19pm