My love, thy beauty is to me
Like those beautiful red roses
That are gently placed on a moving branch
The slow swaying shaking but no stopping
As the beach breeze passes by.
The stormy wind set me free
To fly away with my unknown misery
A beautiful scent, purer than mine
Thy Naiad airs have brought me home
Far away from the storm
Thy beautiful eyes, thy hyacinth hair
How admirably I see thee come
Picking me up, bringing me in
In the world that you belong in
Like a vase to thy rose
Oh, to thy rose.
Submitted: June 29, 2011
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Great poem, the alliteration is a nice addition :)
Fri, July 1st, 2011 10:26pm
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Thnx Corr :D :D
Thu, July 7th, 2011 8:24am
Yes..I saw ur request,one of many...but to be honest this poem is so awesome...gave u a big like :x
Mon, July 4th, 2011 4:08pm
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Thnx Darkie :D
Thu, July 7th, 2011 8:23am
Very beautiful and creative. You descriptions are vivid.
Thu, July 14th, 2011 4:33pm
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thanks khano:D
Thu, July 14th, 2011 10:45am
It was lovely and elegant. I love how you wrote it to be so decriptive.
Thu, July 14th, 2011 8:19pm
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thnx. :D
Thu, July 14th, 2011 1:50pm
Beautifully written poem ... I can see there's a lot of meaning behind the words, and the poem itself flows perfectly ^^ Wonderful!
Thu, July 14th, 2011 9:15pm
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thnx alot :D
Thu, July 14th, 2011 2:51pm
I love this poem! Well done! Nice diction and imagery!
Thu, July 14th, 2011 10:50pm
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thnx a lot :D
Fri, July 15th, 2011 3:08am
It's beautiful and better than mine.
Fri, July 15th, 2011 5:34pm
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haha. thnx. i didn't read yours. i'll check it out now.
Sat, July 16th, 2011 5:47am
Good word choice, took a risk with the use of classic language. I like it, bold. Good job man!
Fri, July 15th, 2011 7:09pm
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thnx. :D
Sat, July 16th, 2011 5:44am
you're love poems are defintely a bit lighter than mine :) lol these are like a breath of fresh air
Fri, July 15th, 2011 7:11pm
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hahaha. glad i'm helping. thnx
Sat, July 16th, 2011 5:44am
this is beuatiful! i loeve them, thanks for asksing me to read. can you read my poem????
Sat, July 16th, 2011 8:41am
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thanks.. sure i will.
Sat, July 16th, 2011 5:39am
Beautiful and heart warming! ^___^, Keep up the good work!
Sun, July 17th, 2011 7:57am
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thnx :D
Sun, July 17th, 2011 2:34am
it's such a great poem :-D
Mon, July 18th, 2011 4:33pm
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thnx :D
Mon, July 18th, 2011 9:39am
This is beautifully written! I really like this!! Great job:) Keep up the awesome work!
Mon, July 18th, 2011 11:46pm
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thnx. im glad you liked it :D
Tue, July 19th, 2011 12:00am
This is very beautiful and descriptive! Thanks for inviting me to read, this poem is absolutely amazing = )
Mon, July 18th, 2011 11:51pm
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thnx :D I'm glad u liked it.
Mon, July 18th, 2011 11:59pm
wow..beautifully written!
Mon, July 18th, 2011 11:52pm
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thnx :D
Mon, July 18th, 2011 11:59pm
fantastic poem well written and great descriptions
Tue, July 19th, 2011 8:11am
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thnx :D
Tue, July 19th, 2011 6:33am
I M A FAN OF YRS,U R SUCH A GRT8 POET
Tue, July 19th, 2011 4:12pm
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haha thnx a mil :D
Wed, July 20th, 2011 1:54am
hey I like this very good:)
Tue, July 19th, 2011 4:51pm
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thnx a lot :D
Wed, July 20th, 2011 1:55am
This is absolutely brilliant!! Wonderful..
Wed, July 20th, 2011 9:12am
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thnx :D
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This is beautifully written and I really like all the literal divices you have used . This poem had a brilliant flow and lovely rhymes inside it. I like the emotion all the words collected together make. It''s like each word is a rose of its own and collected together they make a bouquet. Keep up the good work! :D
Wed, June 29th, 2011 3:44pmAuthor
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Thank you soo much. I appreciate that.
Wed, June 29th, 2011 1:05pm