The Greatest thing called love

Poem by: subbu

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My first poem..............May be Its not perfect but I love this poem...........

The flower is incomplete without dew
My life is incomplete without you
My life seems to have no meaning
If it wasn’t for our meeting
And now my life is meaningful
And the moment with you is always joyful
Memories are hard to die, may be
I shall never forget, then why remember
I don’t want our love to be romantic
But for at least let it not be dramatic
The world is sweet and wonderful
But to me, without you, the world is dreadful
In this world you’re a beautiful dove
And till death never forget my love
I will certainly find a place for my name in history
But let me find a place for me in your heart _______

Submitted: June 25, 2008

Romance love romance life happy sad beauty lovely lovers flower first love best love

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Dark Skylight

This is sooo beautiful poem.I like it.Really great. :)

Thu, June 26th, 2008 12:25pm

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Thanks!!!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:31pm

indiefreak

stunningly beautiful... i love the honesty you brought into this poem. nice job:)

Sat, June 28th, 2008 8:04am

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Thanks!!!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:31pm

Raya

Great poem. Very romantic.stunningly beautiful.

Sat, June 28th, 2008 1:48pm

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Thanks!!!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:30pm

deshpandevicky

best yarrrrrr

Mon, June 30th, 2008 4:52am

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Thanks!!!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:27pm

saraalsaiegh

beautiful beautiful choice of words! well done. i love it.

Mon, June 30th, 2008 6:58am

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Thank you..........

Mon, June 30th, 2008 11:22pm

Sameera2711

itz sweet.

Mon, June 30th, 2008 9:08pm

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Thank you sameera.........

Mon, June 30th, 2008 11:23pm

Pratibha

did i like it? nope...

I loved it, Subbu....WOW....how old r u by the way? U r so young and write with such maturity....

these lines need ur consideration though buddy

"Memories are hard to die, may be, but
I shall never forget, then why remember"

sorry i did not understand the meaning....

Tue, July 1st, 2008 5:17am

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Thank you...........

Mon, June 30th, 2008 11:25pm

Pratibha

The flower is incomplete without dew
My life is incomplete without you

But let me find a place for me in your heart _______

LOVELY LINES....who is the lucky girl...Introduce her to all of us sweetheart

Tue, July 1st, 2008 5:19am

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Im so happy you liked my poem.........I will definitely like to introduce the girl to you all........Hope it does happens.......

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:33pm

subbu

Thanks a lot Mrs pratibha..........Can u help me with something.......when someone comment in my poem........how do i reply to their comment?????......neways Im 19 years old.......and actually what i meant in
"Memories are hard to die, may be, but
I shall never forget, then why remember"

is that I shall never forget the girl,not even for a moment,so there is no need for me to remember her as a memory.She will always be a part of me.......

Tue, July 1st, 2008 5:25am

seesawmae

lovely poem, very well written!

Tue, July 1st, 2008 2:13pm

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Thanks!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:23pm

invisiblexme

i love it. its really sweet. you did a great job with this one too! =)

Tue, July 1st, 2008 8:52pm

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Thanks!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:22pm

ezzy

nice.

Wed, July 2nd, 2008 2:46am

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Thanks!!!!!!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:18pm

Aislin Kane

You write good poems, but I would like to see one without rhyme.

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 7:36pm

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I have written few poems without rhyme........I will soon upload it..........Thank you for your wonderful comment............

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:30pm

Kyoshi14

very beautiful and sweet. I like it, good job. =]

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 8:17pm

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Thanks a lot.............Have a wonderful time..........

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:26pm

Susan Hartline Fouts

You have a gentle peaceful spirit about you that is calming and is reflected in your writing. Keep writing. Love, Susan

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 8:32pm

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Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...........It means a lot to me.......

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:22pm

xxemoxbfsxx

simply beautiful.

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Thu, July 3rd, 2008 9:23pm

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Thanks a lot for ur comment...........

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:20pm

storyofmylife

loved it.
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very sweet

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 9:36pm

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THank you for your time..............

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:19pm

Thomas

Aww I liked that. It was really nice.

A good poem about love.

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:05pm

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Oh thanks Thomas..........Im happy u like it..........

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:19pm

Catherine

lovely.

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 11:52pm

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Thank you for your time catherine.............

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:18pm

RaisinGirl

this is really sweet and u definitely are a good writer...unfortunately, it has been a very longtime since I felt this romantic-my first true love of three years felt like your words...ever since then-I can honestly say I am a bit pessimistic when it comes to romance...maybe one day I will feel this way about someone, but in the meantime, it looks very bleak...but still, good stuff, dude ;D

Fri, July 4th, 2008 8:03am

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Thanks!!!!!!Im sur you will find someone made for you.......Have a nice day.........

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:15pm