Winter Wonderland

Eraser

i made a few edits to the flow. still not sure it is right. my poetry technique is very poor.

gwenraven

Great imagery. I love snow, too.

Hoodling

Good poem man =)

pearlinanoyster

Simply amazing! Commendable use of metaphors. Also, I like the brilliant combination of the lovely pics with your equally delightful poetry. Keep it up :)

Evelyn Ward

Really loved the way you captured winter so simply.

Evelyn

Anaica

your poems seem to bring a lot of good memories for me. I love the snow. The poems and pictures remind me of when I lived in New York. Walking out side right after it snows is the greatest.

saif wasiullah

This is indeed wonderland (sans Alice). Great work. ;-)

Julian Christoph

Very dreamy and comforting. As if, despite the cold, the beauty of such scenery alone is warming, like a heavy blanket. Great job. :)

darlingILY

It's very dreamy. I also like how you worded this poem. I like snow so yeah. =]

tin2twinkling

wonderful poem! and excellent pictures too... =)

sunshine09

I loved it
Especially since I love winter
Very well written
:)

gabrielbrum

cool! you also added realism with the pictures =)

Anthony Lopez

this poem cooled me (intense Californian summer right now lol) good work! ^__^

SandMan

I'm a true lover of winter, and this right here, is a big reason why. It really does make the entire world seem like a wonderland. I liked this peace, thanks for sharing it Eraser!

Ibassus

Hmmm. captivating imagery!

I was slightly salivating at the picture you painted for us.

I especially love "Hydrants are Toadstools"

unique, new, and it works!

However, the last three lines didn't do much for me.

I am not sure how to go about ending a piece like this, but I do feel it could have been one final stunning image.

"We are in a different land"...this should be changed into something more definite. A different land is too bland a description for the already wondrous scene

Zephyr

Dreamy and wonderful. i live in a country that's summer all year round, you know. But you've brought the magic of winter to me.

Chimeron

Wow I really loved the visual effect of this one, thanks for sharing :)

Chimeron

I have to add though that it actually gave me motion sickness, the moving pictures... weird. But I still liked the effect a lot. Guess I'm a masochist.

Brooke Gross

Makes me think of when I was little, and I would wake up to look out the window and see a thick blanket of snow. For just that one moment, you felt like you had been transported in your sleep to some other place.

MelissaWoodscourt

Another beautiful piece. You've captured the silent wonder of a wintry day beautifully. There's something airy and delicious in the way you paint your worded picture here. Lovely, lovely.