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You're my song without lyrics,
stripped away and bare.
You're my naked music-
I see everything that's there.
You're the sound of comming home
after being lost for so long.
You're the comforting sound of wind-
my favourite love song.
You're the sound of embracing waves,
catching where they go.
You're my heavenly harp,
my piano soft and low.
You're the soothing sound of chimes,
swaying in the wind
my loud and crazy drums,
the laughter of a kid
You're my crackle of the fire,
lighting up the dark.
You're the sound of falling rain,
a firecracker's spark.
You're the sound of utter silence,
cutting out the scream.
You're the sound of chirping birds,
the sound of falling leaves.
You're my song without lyrics,
stripped away and bare.
You're my nakes music-
I love you beyond compare
Submitted: May 13, 2008
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EXCELLENT! wow! I'm just a bit stressed with booksie and how errrrrrrrrrrr it is!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm so mad!
but your poem is splendid, the cherry on top of my bitter anger towards internet! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
x
don't worry I'm gonna be fine.^____^
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haha, I'm just as frustrated. thanks for the lovely comments:)
Mon, May 12th, 2008 7:08pm
This is awesome, Steph! The way you describe and portray it is beautiful and wonderful. Keep up the fantastic writing! Love always,
prepPRINCESS~April?
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thanks so much April (is that ur name?) it is greatly apreciated
Mon, May 12th, 2008 7:07pm
Dear Steph,
hey this is so unusual approach...wow,...
i loved every bit of it....did u say u r a teenager...
so much depth and sensibility....well done...lol
so much to learn from youngsters....
lovely and serene...yes serene is the right word
You're the *comferting* sound of wind-
just correct this spelling to comforting....
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oh, haha, thanks...thanks so much for the compliment Pratibha:) I really apreciate it!
Tue, May 13th, 2008 4:29am
OK SO I LOVE THE INTRO ^_^
OH I'M YOUR NAKED MUSIC?
OH I DON'T KNOW I LOOK NAKED TO YOU XD
OK SO NO MORE JOKES FOR ME...
TO BE SERIOUS, YOU KNOW ITS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE... YES ADORABLE... VERY ADORABLE...
AND FIGURATIVE... YES... I LOVE POETRY WITH ALL THE VASES AND PROPS ... ITS COOL!
OH THIS IS VERY FANTASTIC... I FEEL THE CHILL,
I COULD TOUCH ITS WARMTH...
I COULD SEE YOU DANCING IN THE RAIN ^_^
THEN LYING ON THE ROAD... WATCHING EVERY OTHER CARS PASS BY...
ITS LIKE YOU STROKED YOUR FINGERS FROM MY FOREHEAD
ACROSS MY CHEEKS
AND DOWN IN THE CHIMNEY... OH I MEAN CHIN XD
YES, COZ ITS SWEET AND WONDERFUL...
VISIONARY AND HEARTFELT...
MY TYPE OF POEMS
THE TYPE OF POETRY THAT I LOVE... ^_^
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you have no clue what big smile I have on my face right now because of your comment. THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH:)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 4:25am
You've written a beautiful poem, Stephanie, with an unusual combination of intensity and depth. I'm going to love exploring more of your work.
Tue, May 13th, 2008 10:20am
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wow, I love you comment. thanks so much fore reading my dear:)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 4:22am
Aw, Steph this is SO lovely! Every line is perfect and makes for a beautiful statement, and love really is that sweet! I absolutely loved it! ~ Nixie
Tue, May 13th, 2008 2:51pm
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Awww, thanks so much Nixie. I'm glad you liked it;)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 11:01am
naked music. everyone has been commenting that line. it is particularly interesting. i'm glad to hear something i haven't yet.
Lydia_xxxx
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thanks, I'll take that as a compliment. lol, yess, I've always been the "different" one if everything I do. Thanks again!
Tue, May 13th, 2008 3:44pm
lol i liked it ^_^.
Tue, May 13th, 2008 8:30pm
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haha, thanks alot for reading my dear:)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 3:43pm
great poem...beautiful words. well done
-josee-
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thanks:)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 3:53pm
hey steph, loved your poem and I love the choice of words that you used. you are inspiring and insightful. Keep writting sis.
-Em:P
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haha, hey Em:) Glad to see your comming around. thanks for the comments:)
Tue, May 13th, 2008 4:04pm
sweeet i loved it !!
welll going to schooll bye
loved it
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haha, thanks tilla, luv yah(:
Wed, May 14th, 2008 5:42am
loved it. i loved everything from the flow to the words. especially "you're the sound of utter silence, cutting out the scream"
Wed, May 14th, 2008 6:23pm
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haha, thanks. I think that was one of my fav lines too:P thanks so much for reading and commenting.:)
Wed, May 14th, 2008 11:42am
You warmed and old gal's heart with these sweet words. You must be a very sweet young girl.
Wed, May 14th, 2008 9:11pm
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awww, thanks so much. I'd like to think I am:) lol. thanks so much for reading and commenting:P
Wed, May 14th, 2008 2:15pm
Wow this has alot of comments! And it deserves all of them! This poem was really good, I gave it an I liked it. Anyway,this was really good (yes I know I already said that). But it was the title that caught my eye! Cause I love music, and I had to check it out, and I'm glad I did! And please tell me when you post new stuff, like your awsome novel! Talk to ya later!
Wed, May 14th, 2008 9:14pm
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lmao, thanks so much Rayne my dear. I'm in the midst of writting the new chapter right now, and I'm almost done:P hahaha, thanks so much for reading and commenting:)
Wed, May 14th, 2008 2:16pm
Wow.
This is so beautifully written.
Rayne said about the title.
I agree I usually just look for titles that appeal to me and this one certinly did.
I loved it.
Hope to see more poems out from you soon.
-Ally
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awww, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it ma belle:)
Thu, May 15th, 2008 4:58am
grat poem and beautiful words i love it.great job.
Thu, May 15th, 2008 3:39pm
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wow, thanks so much,. Ì'm glad you like it:P
Thu, May 15th, 2008 10:57am
a really lovely poem. this is the first of your work i have read. gonna take some time and read more. i really enjoyed this. snow =)
Thu, May 15th, 2008 9:13pm
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awww, thanks. I hope you like the rest of my work:P I'll be sure to check out yours:P
Thu, May 15th, 2008 5:36pm
Steph. Excellant! I adored the way you incorporated different sensory elements into the piece, and also
the references to natures wonders. You really like this person huh?? Ricky.
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lol, yupp. thanks for reading:P
Sat, May 17th, 2008 8:31am
wholly lots of comments already. well i love this poem i think u put a lot of potential in this work. good job on how everything flowed and i can't wait to read more.. even though i haven't been on in a while
Fri, May 16th, 2008 10:35pm
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Glad you're back, lol. thanks for reading!
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Oh, I love it! All the visual and sound imagery is great! I'm trying to imagine right now what falling leaves sound like. Naked music? *sigh*
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haha, thx so much em:)
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