The enchanting smile on your lips
And your tender touch
Freezing my heart
When you bid goodbye…
On your deathbed!
Embracing me closer and tighter
Never wanting to let me go!
I will never forget,
The undying spark of passion you possessed
Missing me with every breath
And the longing you had to see me
In the deepest corner of your heart!
I will never forget,
How sincere, trustworthy and lovable you were
And the unconditional love you had,
In your heart, with no bounds!
I will never forget,
The precious sensuous moments we shared together!
The greatest feeling we experienced when we made love!
Forgetting all pains and sorrows, we had in life.
After all,
I will never forget
That special you!
The flame of my love!
The angel of my mind!
The light and dream of my life!
The joy of my soul!
The rainbow of my heart!
My dearest wife!
My sweet rose!
I will now leave you like a friend!
Farewell my love!
I will never forget you!
Srinidhi.R
Submitted: May 24, 2009
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Aw...very sweet!
You are right I could sense a lot of emotion in this!
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thanks for reading...
Sun, May 24th, 2009 9:04am
it was sweet, i could tell you really loved the subject of this poem.
if you get a chance, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think!
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Thanks for reading...i will definetly check out your poems
Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:05pm
This poem was very emotional! I liked your use of punctuation, it made the poem very powerful. Great job!
Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:49am
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thanks for your comment..
Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:05pm
wow that was amazing!!!!! I can tell that you put a lot of your feeling in to it
Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:52am
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THANKS FOR READING...
Mon, May 25th, 2009 12:58am
WOW THIS IS REALLY SWEET AND ROMANTIC POEM. I COULD TELL YOU REALLY FELT IT. GREAT WORK. ~JENN
Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:07am
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thanks for reading!!!!!!!!
Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:09am
awww, soo sweet!! ????
Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:50am
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thanks for reading..
Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:50am
It's so great! Keep up the good work.
Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:58am
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thank you!
Mon, May 25th, 2009 3:03am
I love this..so much emotion in it..great job :)
Mon, May 25th, 2009 12:04pm
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thank you for reading....
Mon, May 25th, 2009 5:35am
It's never easy losing the ones you love... DX
Love is a flame... never let the fire burn out xx
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thank u for your comment
Mon, May 25th, 2009 6:03am
Wow :o
That was deep..
I started to tear up a bit here,
I loved how you ended it with him saying
"I will leave you like a friend"
And saying farewell...
It really struck it home :)
Fantastic work!
Please keep writing!
Pinky promise me lolz :)
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wow..thank u !
Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30am
This is a beautiful piece. It's so very touching and moving. I loved it, keep up the great writing.
Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:01pm
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thanks for reading it
Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30pm
Great job Nid! That was a very well written and powerful poem that you wrote! Very worth the read! Again, good job!
Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:38pm
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thanks for reading cheetahbear...
Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30pm
That is a very sad poem with lots of emotion and meaning :]. Great job, Nid! May your wife rest in peace :] :].
Good luck to you all :]!!!!
God bless you all :]!!!!
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thanksssssssss a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:31pm
sweet, sad, and so moving at the same time... poor man though =(
Tue, May 26th, 2009 1:07am
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thanks for reading...
Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:31pm
thank u all for reading and giving a "i like it" vote...ur comments mean so much to me
Tue, May 26th, 2009 4:55am
Awesome work; I love emotive poetry and you've achieved that perfectly. :D
Keep up the good work.
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thankssss for reading
Tue, May 26th, 2009 2:51am
Thank you so much for asking me to rad this wonderful piece. It was very beautiful. You did an excellent job.
Take Care,
Ana
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thanksssssssssssssssss ana...
Tue, May 26th, 2009 7:07am
That is really good! A lot of emotion in it. It be great if you could check out some of my stories and poems! Thanx a bunch ~SAGE
Tue, May 26th, 2009 8:24pm
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thanks for reading! I will check out all of 'em
Tue, May 26th, 2009 9:19pm
Well first off, I really hope you weren't writing this peace from personally experience, but rather a theory or thought, because if you did it reaches a whole new depth of understanding.
I really enjoyed the poem, not maybe the best day to read it, because I ended up crying, common symptom of having a bad day, lol xD
Keep writing and update me when you have something new, I'm going now to check out some of your other stuff.
~Lady Leah~
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thanks lady leah for reading this!
Wed, May 27th, 2009 9:48pmFacebook Comments
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please read this poem! Its brand new written by me with a lot of feelings
Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:07am