I Miss You Too Much

YaSoora

Try to put new word and unique stuff...
Nice job,Keep it up!!!

Mia Lavoie

Awww o cute! love it :D

Could you please read my story and possibly give me some feedback? Thanks :)
http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/book/mia_lavoie/the-tragic-tale-of-mia-lavoie

hotstory4you

its too good, so simple and meaningful.

glitter snow426

oh so powerful deep and true to the word greatness! This is so AWESOME, LOVE YOUR COOL STYLE!

Teach

Great! Such a lovely poem....keep up the good work.

Vampire17

It's really cute! And sad... keep up the good work! :D

Jezemaya

Okay, I loved this poem, but there are a couple errors you might want to fix. First of all, a lot of your "your"s should be you're because they're supposed to be you are. And then with the last line of the 3rd stanza, you say "we've grown to old too quickly" and you should either drop the "to" between grown and old or make it too so that it is "we've grown old too quickly" or "we've grown too old too quickly".
I loved the emotions in this poem though and, with those minor mistakes, it is an outstanding first booksie-piece. =)

Shweta

Lovely, cheeky monkey. :) Take the advice of Jezemaya, poem will look better.

opal8

Hey, over all I thought it was a great poem. I like the topic and I think it's a topic that most people could relate to. The only thing I would do is maybe add a few new vocab words. Oh, and you have a couple of errors in your grammar,but that happens to everyone. Other than that I think you've got a great poem and I look forwards to reading some of your other work.

I don't know if you have or wan't to, but if you have time will you read some of my work and give me feedback. THANKS!!

BEASTLYAK47

Good work!KMU!:)

peoplehateme101

AWWWW, so sweet!, In a weird way i guess but sweet nontheless

JessicaA

I really liked it. It said so much and it was deep. Hey would you like it to appear in a book. I think I would like to use it if you let me. I would give you full credit of course, but read my story and tell me if that appeals to you. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.

yue thao

This is nice n awesome n amazing n sad. I understand this feeling

FloweredStag

it's almost like a song ^_^ good work *thumbs up*

fresh spirits

Pretty Nice:)

Ana Esther

Enjoyable verses. It's a very difficult topic for a poem because it's been approached by lots of poets!!! You manage to convey the pain behind the verses. Good on you. Ana Esther

FallenNinjaRouge

It's nice. Kind of simple though...I would try using some new words with a little more meaning to them to get the point of the whole poem across.
All in all nicely done.

Blackdragon99

Hey mate I sense some emotion in this. I don't know I you have experienced what you are trying to portray though so maybe that's why we don't get the full impact. I LOVE how it doesn't rhyme and it still holds a fair flow. KMU on ya works you can only improve

arun

Cool... nice poem...
Take care :)

Biya

It's a very beautiful poem! Enjoyed reading it!
Well done! :)