Handle With Care
I just found out
That all the rumors
Are just that.
None of the lies are true
And you really do care.
And that you want to hold me close,
And open up your heart to me.
In return
My dear love,
I give you a key.
This is the key
To my heart.
So please
Handle with care.
You have hurt me once
But I’m forgiving you
And letting you back inside.
I will not say goodbye
But only until again.
Because you hold the key
And will be allowed in
As long as you handle with care.
Submitted: August 26, 2009
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love it!!!!
Wed, August 26th, 2009 11:31pm
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Thanks! :D
So Great!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!
Thu, August 27th, 2009 12:00am
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Thanks!!! Glad you liked it! :D
wow thats sweet and i love it!:)
Thu, August 27th, 2009 12:07am
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Thanks!!! Glad you like it! :D
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Thanks! :D
I like this alot.
Thu, August 27th, 2009 1:10am
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thanks!!! Glad you like it! :D
That was really good! I'm not laughing at you when I say this, more like laughing with you, but the one line says: None of the lies are true, I was like, well duh, that's why they are called lies! But let me shut up now, that was really good and once again true to the heart I bet!
Thu, August 27th, 2009 1:30am
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Thanks! lol. you're right. haha! thanks and it was! :D
Love and heartbreak, can create good poems Most poems written from the soul or heart are great. I hope things work better this time. Your poem has good flow Well written.
Thu, August 27th, 2009 1:37am
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Yep, you're right. Thanks and good luck writing! :D
Another great poem. It is like a sequel to your other poem. Nice work. So, obviously you gave him another chance. This time you gave him the key. But, when mistreated you can always take the key back. All you can do is try your colors. Test his colors. The way you wrote this one was very simple. I'm not saying simple is bad, but it allows for understanding to be much more fluid. Also, this is the type of poetry that I prefer. Not something complex, or hard to understand. But something that can have great meaning, and be read simply. Smoothly. You accomplish this thing. Nice poem.
Favorite line, "Handle with care". He better!
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Thanks! Lol. Yeah it is. I did forgive him because nothing that I'd heard was real. Yes, I did give it to him. Thanks and I like your comment. I'm glad you like it and I'm glad it turned out well. That's one of my favorite lines too! thanks and good luck writing! :D
Great poem I felt how fragile your heart had become. Love hurts and there is no fear greater than the anxiety you have when another holds your entire heart in their hands. Love carefully.
Thu, August 27th, 2009 10:31am
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Thanks! Yeah your right. Thanks and you too! :D
i love this!!! obviously, others do too ? hehe u r one popular chick! nice work ?
Thu, August 27th, 2009 1:48pm
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thanks and I'm glad everyone likes it! lol. That's good! Thanks again! :D
This is really good! The title fits well! but i dont get the
part. What is that???? Is booksie just being bad??? Also, chack out A field of Sun.
*****Holli*****
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Thanks!!! Glad you like it! Hmm, I'll look at what is wrong. Thanks for letting me know! :D I'll check it out as soon as I can! :D
okay the on the end so it shows up!!
Thu, August 27th, 2009 10:00pm
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ok :D
Fri, August 28th, 2009 3:01pm
BOOKSIE IS BEING BAD IT IS MESSING UP MY POSTS. okay. done venting. lol bad booksie. grr.
Thu, August 27th, 2009 10:01pm
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lol. I know booksie does that to me too! lol.
:D
This key will unlock all the loveliness in your heart.
Fri, August 28th, 2009 1:58am
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Thanks! Glad you liked it! Good luck writing! :D
love it i like the title the whole concept of giving your heart to someone and the key to open it ! i have a poem called key to my heart and follow my heart and a few other ones you might like
ps : i like you wrote to express how your feeling becuase its better to write from your heart . kept up the good work !:D and tell me when you add more up i love your work
youfoundme
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Thanks! Glad you love it! thanks I really liked this poem and the whole concept too. Thanks and I'm glad you think so. I'll check out your poems as soon as I can. Thanks and I will. Glad you like it and thanks for the comment! Good luck writing! :D
they say that the heart of a woman has just one room, just only one man can get in it , but the man's heart has many rooms and many girls can get in his heart, but the man loves the one who entered the room that he loves or preferes.good work keep it up
Fri, August 28th, 2009 10:27pm
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thanks! Glad you liked it! :D Good luck writing! :D
nice work Vi! Keep it up and tell me when you write more! I'm still trying to get aroung to reading An Unexpected Love chapter7.
Oh, heres some cool sites I'm on (they rock):
textnovel.com (I'm BlackInk there)
youngwritersonline.net
and storywrite.com (I'm BlackInk there too)
I know that was random but they are helpful and fun sites :) but none are as good as booksie
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Thanks! I'll let you know! Thanks and I can't wait to hear what you think! Oh cool. I'll check those out as soon as I can. lol. :D
I Love it! it has great emotion and you say your jelous of me lol Nah really great work i gave it an "I like it" vote.
Keep up the awesome work
xx Forevercharmed
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it! lol. Thanks for the I Like It. :D
wow, this is really well written.
it's vivid and it sounds so deep =D
Great job!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it and it turned out well! :D
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i love it i like the title the whole concept of giving your heart to someone and the key to open it :D again can't criticise this because your talking about feelings for someone you love :)good poetry xD KEEP IT UP lol x
Wed, August 26th, 2009 11:07pmAuthor
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Thanks! Yeah, I've always wanted to do something like this and then when something happened today it gave me the perfect opportunity. lol. Thanks and I'm glad that it is good! I'll keep writing! Good luck to you! :D
Wed, August 26th, 2009 4:09pm