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poetrocks:
Tried to give this posting an "I Like It" vote but was prevented from doing so by some kind of "glitch" in the Booksie publishing/posting software. This is why this posting has "0" votes. All ratings given, prior to October 1, 2007, have been wiped-out by Booksie.
You may be able to fix this by re-posting it. Seems to be a common flaw for short poems under the "New & Improved" Booksie. Let me know.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
poetrocks:
The "I Like It" voting problem for this posting has been fixed. Will tend to your other postings as well.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Simple and expressive
Wed, January 16th, 2008 11:40pmI recieved a lot of imagery out of such few words! Very well done! I liked it a lot
Fri, January 25th, 2008 9:25amsimple...why complicate an emotion that is already complicated enough...very well written and great emotion...
Mon, February 11th, 2008 10:25pmReally great poem.....Juliet
Thu, February 14th, 2008 7:19pmIt's beautuful. That's all I can really say. :)
Tue, April 22nd, 2008 9:48pmThere is no better moment than waking in the arms of a loved one. Clean. Simple. Beautiful.
Fri, September 12th, 2008 2:47ami liked it^^
Fri, October 31st, 2008 9:55pmFantastic. What about morning breath?
I agree it is nice to wake up like this...
And, oops it is not a Haiku, and yet it has the spirit on one -- deep meanings in few words.
craaig
simple but great
Sun, November 9th, 2008 3:55pmoh it's beautiful! Please check out my poetry and leave a comment, and stories!
Mon, November 10th, 2008 2:50amso sweet and simple. just the way i like my haikus! very nice. check out some of my love inspired poetry. write on!
Mon, November 17th, 2008 6:38pmNice work, lovely poem:)
Sat, February 14th, 2009 11:50amShort and sweet....a good one...
Tue, June 16th, 2009 12:00pmI love how haikus capture things perfectly with such few words. Yours did that and thats hard to do.
Fri, June 19th, 2009 8:30amI didn't know you could tell about something so big in such a small form. It was very nice.
Sat, August 8th, 2009 5:42pmOne word; Amazing.
(:
Haikulacious ...ly, neat...
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Ashygrl
Wow that's absolutly genius and true i totally understand... it i love haukis!!-ashy
Sat, April 14th, 2007 10:48pmAuthor
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Thank you, its amazing how much you can say with so few words.
Sat, April 14th, 2007 4:36pm