Dimpled Smile

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I'm big sucker of a beautiful dimples on the face of pretty girls. This poem is dedicated to all the beautiful girls with an awesome dimpled smile and sparkly eyes.

Dimpled Smile

Crescent on a clear, flawless sky

So prominent, lively and so bright

With two sparkling stars so nigh

One on left and one on its right

Two more radiating just above

Announcing what a festivities! Wow!

Its arrival sacred

And sooo eagerly awaited

Elating like heavenly bliss

Liable and worth a loving kiss.

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Submitted: January 07, 2013

Romance love smile beloved festivities dimple

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ben hardstaff

Very imaginative and i particularly liked the last 2 lines, please read and share your thoughts on my work, thanks

Mon, January 7th, 2013 7:51am

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Thanks for liking the poem. :)

Mon, January 7th, 2013 12:55am

ashi17

Doc' says dimples are a facial muscle deformity but poet says it enhances a beauty of a person. And I am feeling great to read this piece with my dimpled smile. Thanks a lot for dedicating it.
It is really one of your most lovable and relatable piece in my opinion. Loved it !

Mon, January 7th, 2013 12:42pm

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Oh, it's great to know that you've a dimpled smile. I've a weakness for dimples on pretty girls so it coincidentally gets dedicated to you. Let's see who else come forward and relate my poem to themselves. Thanks by the way for loving my poem, I feel honored. ^-^

Mon, January 7th, 2013 8:09pm

thumblina Aka vandana

Another lovly poem......

Your gurl is very lucky to have a guy like you...

Glad you commented on my poem.......I am getting to read some nice romantic poems.......which I can be connected to a few.....

Thank you...

Tue, January 8th, 2013 6:16am

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Thank you once again. I actually dedicated the poem to all the pretty girls with dimples and not just my muse (she is not my love or girlfriend). So any girl with such features can relate my poem with them.

Tue, January 8th, 2013 3:25am

KCNiemi

I really like this :)

Wed, January 9th, 2013 8:32pm

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Thanks for reading and liking it.

Wed, January 9th, 2013 8:13pm

W J Harris

Im ot the biggest fan of this kindof poetry but its pretty good.... Have you read my novel?

Wed, January 9th, 2013 8:45pm

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It seems like you don't like romance, but my finesse lies in romance. Thanks anyways for stopping by and spending your precious time here.

Wed, January 9th, 2013 8:13pm

Criss Sole

I really enjoyed reading this. I thought it was very sweet.

Thu, January 10th, 2013 4:07pm

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Thanks very much for your kind comment.

Thu, January 10th, 2013 8:54am

Juli Monat

Beautiful expression on beauty itself. Magnifico!

Fri, January 11th, 2013 12:41pm

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Thanks for your comment and read :)

Fri, January 11th, 2013 12:23pm

Riuku

Short and sweet and the last two lines rock.

Sat, January 12th, 2013 7:26am

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Thanks a lot :))

Sat, January 12th, 2013 4:54am

Zaneerah Y

Oh! What a great poem. I saw your request and came fill it. Beautiful describing words. So detailed.

~Angel BeatZ

Sat, January 12th, 2013 8:18pm

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Thanks for visiting and commenting :)

Sat, January 12th, 2013 9:17pm

Sultry Alice

You are both a poet and a romantic. Two of my favorite combinations. To me a smile means "come and get it, I am accessable and open. I don't mean get everything, just some things!" You paint a pretty picture with your words, glad you included a nice example to help the people who struggle a little with imagination!

Great poem for a shorty!

Thanks

Sun, January 20th, 2013 12:47pm

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Thanks for showering all the appreciation and kind words. I'm deeply honored and humbled. It means a lot to me. ^_^

Sun, January 20th, 2013 4:56am

Gift Of Noni

D12,

Another nice poem. I always say Q: what's the top thing a woman can wear to make herself more attractive? A: a smile =) They say the true beauty of a person is on the inside. A smile is where that comes out =)

Regards,

Tim

Sun, January 20th, 2013 1:26pm

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Thanks a lot. Yes, a smile is often the first thing a babies knows before they learn to speak. Smile is what distinguishes human being from animals.

Sun, January 20th, 2013 8:33am

Shama998

I like the end of the poem , it's COOL !

Mon, January 21st, 2013 4:53am

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Thanks sooo much!

Sun, January 20th, 2013 9:02pm

Readwritelove

I think that is a beautifully written, wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing! Would you mind taking a look at some of mine?

Mon, January 21st, 2013 6:33am

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Thanks for appreciating. :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 2:52am

annasteele

Just one word - BEAUTIFUL !!!

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:41am

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Thanks a zillion!

Mon, January 21st, 2013 2:48am

kdoll

Nicely written. Enjoyed it very much. It is a beautiful piece.

Mon, January 21st, 2013 6:32pm

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Thanks :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:10pm

smircle

I love how you compared them to the stars in the sky! I love dimples but I sadly don't have them ;( boohoo for me but I really love the poem, the words flow beautifully together :D Great job!

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:51pm

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Thank you sooo much for loving the poem and your kind work.

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:09pm

erinkirkpatrick

Well done!!!, this poem was perfect :):).. Thanks for telling me about it :D

Mon, January 21st, 2013 10:37pm

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Thanks so much :))

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:07pm

kimmysweetie08

I've always wanted to have dimples, but I guess it's just not for me. Lol. Your poem is really descriptive. I love your word choices. It's great! :) Good job :)

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 4:13am

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Thanks, Thanks a lot for loving it. :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:15pm