Cant let go.

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knowing that all there is left is false hope
but you still hold on tight to that false hope.

I don't know why i ask for the truth
when i will never ever believe
not really sure why i stay
when i really want to leave
can anyone tell me why i hold on
when i just want to let go
or tell me why i refuse to move on
because i will never know
if anyone can tell me i am all ears
I will do almost anything to know
will someone save these tears
why wont i just let go
why am i still here fighting the same fight
why am i still in total darkness
why do i struggle to find light
I am ever so unhappy never been so low
so i wonder what is stopping me
why wont i just let go?

Submitted: July 18, 2011

Romance love feeling relationship hurt confused deep hearts

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Elana LaVie

This is a good poem and powerful questions
I understand what your saying... and i related to this
good job.
keep writing

Tue, July 19th, 2011 3:23am

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thank you ever so much!!
I am so pleased you can relate..
I remember this feeling well.. feeling weak for not going with my heart.

thank you ever so much for taking the time to read and giving your feedback means so much and i am ever so grateful!

-JiDonnelly'

Mon, July 18th, 2011 8:28pm

SilverSoldier

Loved it :D I used to feel the exact same way about the exact person most of my songs are about...

Thu, July 21st, 2011 1:35am

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n'aww thank you ever soo much!

-JiDonnelly'

Thu, July 21st, 2011 6:39am

whytho

It is such an amazing poem. I loved it. only one constructive criticism: if you would capitalize and punctuate it in some places, it would be much much better.

Fri, July 22nd, 2011 9:59pm

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n'aww thankyou ever so much.

-JiDonnelly'

Fri, July 22nd, 2011 3:20pm