Anger
You can’t even say thank you
Can’t even say one kind word
Or give a faint smile.
I could give up everything for you
And you would never be happy.
You can pout and groan
All day long,
If one thing doesn’t go your way.
No matter what,
You are never happy,
And I can’t please you.
I give up,
And I’ll let you be.
I’ll leave you alone,
With dark clouds
Looming over your head.
Submitted: September 17, 2009
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I understand this poem completely. It's like how can you sacrifice so much for one person that you love. Then, they turn around unthankfully and are un-willing to sacrifice anything for you. It's a deep subject but it happens. I hope things go better for you. Also, I love how you expressed the emotion of the subject within your poem.
Thu, September 17th, 2009 4:28am
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Yeah, that's exactly what it is like. yep, you are totally right. thanks and I hope they do for you too since you said you understand completely. Thanks and I'm glad you liked it! :D
hmmm. . . i like it! very emoitional and just. . i can't explain it GREAT JOB!
Thu, September 17th, 2009 10:18am
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! lol. ok. :D
Nicely done!
Thu, September 17th, 2009 10:49am
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Thanks!!! :D
i like it!!
Thu, September 17th, 2009 11:57am
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Thanks! :D
that's awsome!!!!:)
Thu, September 17th, 2009 5:48pm
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Thanks so much! :D
I understand, sometimes you just can't please people. You conveyed the emotions of anger and frustration very well. Great write!
Thu, September 17th, 2009 7:04pm
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Yeah, I know. Thanks and I'm glad you liked it! :D
Wow, i could feel your angry in that one haha good job, it's conveyed very well!
Thu, September 17th, 2009 7:12pm
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lol. Thanks! :D
wow a strong poem try and chill out but a good poem sj
Thu, September 17th, 2009 11:04pm
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lol. Don't worry, I wrote this a couple months ago and just found so I posted it. lol. Glad you liked it! :D
wow. very good. love it!
?monica
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Thanks! :D
nice, very relatable, we all have gone that route before sad to say.
Fri, September 18th, 2009 10:39am
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Thanks. Yes, sadly this is very relatable. :( Anyway, thanks so much! :D
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... That's good too, but don't let being mad at one person keep you from moving on. Write about something that makes YOU feel good.
... You are just letting himwin if you keep on thinking about him.
... Foget him. Move on. That way he'll see that he didn't matter to you anyway.
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Thanks. Lol, this poem isn't about a guy or the same person. Most of these poems are about different people. lol. Thanks for the advice though and I'll be sure to keep it in mind for the future! :D
WOW this is so how I felt this morning! =D Great poem!
Thu, September 24th, 2009 10:55pm
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lol. really? that's funny. Thanks! Glad you liked it! :D
that was sweet and straight to the point
Sat, September 26th, 2009 11:35am
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Thanks!!! :D
*Violet
I'm lost for words O.O
this is just an incredible poem, really deep. i know how that can feel, but you've just described it so well, i can remember it vividly.
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lol. Thanks. I'm glad that it is well described. Thanks so much! :D
*Violet*
Fantastic poem, I can totally relate to it!
Sun, September 27th, 2009 7:01pm
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Thanks so much!!! Sorry, that you can relate. :D
*Violet*
i love reading poems that flows from within like the spur of the moment kind of poems...when we are lost in our thoughts... I have a few to post...i will share them with you...
Fri, October 2nd, 2009 3:09pm
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Aww, thanks and I agree. Thanks and I can't wait to read them! :D
*Violet*
Great poem, I can really relate to this right now. Write more stuff like this pwease??
Mon, October 5th, 2009 8:53am
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Thanks so much! I'm sorry to hear that. lol. Sure, I'm planning to write more poetry because I really enjoy it. I'll let you know when more is posted! :D
*Violet*
GRATE POEM i liked it im angey now cuse im not alowed to get bones season 4 any way good job :)
- Sabrina
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Thanks so much! lol. Sorry, you can't get them. :( Anyway, thanks again! :D
*Violet*
Wow amazing!. I get that feeling too.
Love it!. Also if you don't mind, can you check out some of my work if you don't mind??.
Thanks!.
XxAlexxX
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Thanks so much! I would be happy to check out your work! It is the least I could do after all the kind comments that you have left me! Thanks so much! :D
*Violet*
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Wow, very emotional. Good job conveying the angst in this. I liked it. I'm currently updating, focusing on my novel Super(teens). I would love your feedback on it; whenever's fine for me. Thanks.
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