a short excerpt from a novel i have been working on for a few years. i'm trying to gauge if this will generate the right emotions from the reader and keep them engaged and connected to the characters.

there's been a rift in this close knit group of adventurers and something had to give.

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The Aftermath


This is just a short piece that I would like to get some feedback on to see if the reader would be engaged and connected to he characters and what they feel at this particular moment.
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