“Haunted Inn.”

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


Mark broke all the rules when he arrived at a haunted hotel. Mark checked into the old hotel and made his way to his room.
It was around 11 at night and mark was exhausted from driving all day. As he sat down, mark had really wanted to have a paranormal encounter.
Right after he got dressed for bed and washed up he turned the lights off in the hotel room and sat down on the bed.
He blinked several times and said out loud 
 
“If there are any wondering spirits here, I invite you to come visit me tonight!” 
 
With that he went to bed.
Almost immediately the closet door swung open on its own and mark could hear footsteps from the bathroom towards his bed.
Mark immediately regretted what he had said as a loud moan could be heard from behind his bed. Suddenly the bed started to shake very violently and a women could be heard screaming.
Mark jumped out of bed and immediately called the front desk and told them what happened.
The lady on the other end said he could spend the remainder of the night in another room as the room he was currently in was the most haunted on that side of the hotel.
Mark didn’t want to have to pack again and move so we just said he’d stick with this room for the remainder of tonight.
With that he hung up and went back to bed. As he was sleeping he felt something jump onto the bed and he began to freak out as he could feel something was standing over his chest holding him down.
Mark screamed and screamed. Finally he was able to move again and nothing else happened that night.
As mark checked out he walked by a security officer and told him what happened.
The man laughed and said
"the whole hotel is haunted. You were probably visited by Amanda. There are a lot of reports of her holding down customers and making people’s experiences here very frightening."
 
With that the man said
 
“I hope you enjoyed your stay at Holiday Inn.”


Submitted: February 11, 2025

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