A suspense novel about finding your place in this world
Uploaded: January 31, 2025
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There is a different feel to this story than Song of Grace. It feels heavier, and by that I mean two things. First, because of the situation, there is a foreboding feeling that you carry along with Miriam as she makes her rounds. The second way this first chapter feels heavy is because you are very descriptive and put a lot of detail into what Miriam sees and feels. Whether you did it on purpose or not, the adjective-heavy narrative adds its own weight to an already gloomy opening chapter.
This is very good writing. :-)
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This is great, Mara. The descriptions are so vivid. Really well done. ????
Sat, February 1st, 2025 3:03pmAuthor
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Wow Thank you :)
Sat, February 1st, 2025 7:52am